Nice song which could do with some 'oomph' injected into it. I really quite enjoyed the 2nd vid then tried the 1st one which I found started off too zzzzz dull and never really seemed to pick up. I'm not entirely sure what they've done differently in the 2nd (one listen each) but that one has some potential. The beginning sounded much more interesting anyway.
Tricky one. I like it but I think they could make it a stormer by adding something. I'm not sure what. Just to make it a little more memorable. I'll scribble it down as one to think about for tomorrow as I go through the rest.
Just tried them both again and they have reworked the opening in the 2nd vid. Definitely picked it up a bit. Nice.
edit:
just read your 1st post in here Beanie and seems we both wanted a little more 'oomph'.